Hey Rob, well done on the Storify. It is clear that you made improvement since the beginning of this whole thing. You did remind me, however, that you did not take my advice in the beginning. That is probably the one and only flaw of your 20time project. Yet it is still a flaw. Haha. But seriously, well done, and you really displayed the progress you made through this, so congrats.
I really liked your Storify, it made your learning process very clear and understandable. The things that you made through the project all looked good, and I have no doubt that your future culinary endeavors will continue to improve.
I graduated from California State University, San Marcos with a B.S. in Mathematics and now I am pursuing a Single Subject Teaching Credential in Mathematics.